Freezing rain
Bleeding rain
Can’t put out the
Boiling pain
Bleeding pain
Can’t wash away the
Bitter tears
Bleeding tears
Can’t fill the
Empty lakes
Empty praise
Watches the breath fade away
Watching these lives fall away
Can’t fill the crater
Fancy cars and pretty girls can’t fill the crater
Left by the sins of the father
Right by the sins of the mother
Are the angels coming to purify
Are the demons coming to purify
Yes
And no
Nice write
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Thank you
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
YES AAND YES FOR THE IMPACT AND CONSTRUCTION OF THIS POEM! GREAT JOB, DEVEREAUX
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Thanks Jonathan 😄
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Did i forget to mention I like the wordplay too
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Wow! I can vybe to this. Its like you can see things a different perspective (by decrypting the truth of your surroundings) if that makes sense
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It does, and thanks for reading 🙂
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@devereaux Frazier
You’re welcome I enjoy reading stuff like this. You quite the gift, keep it up
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Thanks 😁
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No problem mane, I’m a fan of pieces like that. Well again its the wordplay. Hope you have an alias or poet stage name (forgot the actual terminalogy for it Lol)
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